You were recently helped by an employee at the airport. Write to the airport to
Describe the problem
Talk about how you were helped
Suggest how to reward the employee
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to convey my gratitude for one of your employees name Asif who helped me in a crucial time on Sunday 22, 2020 at the airport.
I was traveling to Dubai last week when I got lost my passport in the waiting lounge. I couldn’t able to understand how did it happens as I possess the passport throughout the process starting from boarding to the immigration counter.
I did approach Mr. Asif who was sitting at the reception and explain the whole situation. He was kind enough, listen to my complaint properly, and pass on the information to a relevant authority. He went personally with the rest of the staff available in the suspected area, and find out my passport on time. Otherwise, It won't be possible for me to travel to Dubai for an important meeting.
I would suggest to please nominate his name for the employee of the month award as he goes beyond his limit to help the customer in a critical time.
Best Regards
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2020-03-28 | sohailahmad | 77 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lost my passport in the waiting lounge. I couldn’t able to understand how did it ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...boarding to the immigration counter. I did approach Mr. Asif who was sitting a...
^
Line 9, column 9, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest pleasing'.
Suggestion: suggest pleasing
...ai for an important meeting. I would suggest to please nominate his name for the employee of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59770114943 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63198312741 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64367816092 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.615604864 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 4.34317383033 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128959437338 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040652928078 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543085546334 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834920962621 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059964186969 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.