A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress.
What should people do to stay healthy in your country?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Undoubtedly, an individual who consumes nutritious diet, undergoes regular exercise and does not feel distressed is considered to be a healthy person. Since, globally dwellers are performing ample activities for their self well-being, similarly in my native terrain citizens devote a major chunk of their precious time towards physical exercise and stick with stringent as well as effective diet plans.
Undeniably, a huge portion of populace in prevailing epoch is prone to myriad of chronic ailments because of sedentary lifestyle, still some are profound in sustaining their health by indulging themselves in regular physical activities. Notably, Indians are practicing yoga, going for cycling and becoming gym as well as sports freak which intensifies the stamina and strengthens the immunity. Consequently, this is indispensable for exceptional posture and sound mental well-being. Also, it would be unworthy to overlook the fact highlighted by WHO that the rate of lethal epidemics is trimming down annually in India due to the consistent practice of ancient Yoga among commoners. And how one can forget 21st June? “World Yoga Day” which is the initiative of Indians and is celebrated world widely.
On the top of that, balanced diet always plays a remarkable role in maintaining proficient health. Gladly, my countrymen know the effective repercussions of a healthy and complete meal, thus local people have reduced the intakes of sugar rich items and products which beholds a high degree of carbohydrates. Despite this fact, Indian is also a land of exotic vegetables, herbs and spices which have remedial effects on body as well as mind. Henceforth, commoners are becoming aware of using blends of these eatables in their diet and are able to retain their health in a good state. To typify, as per the survey conducted by American Health Association in the gone calendar year, the proliferated ingestion of indigenous Indian spice “Basil” has merged the obesity rates of Indian masses under absolute control.
To conclude, as there are ends number of measures to sustain the body in a healthy state, therefore exercises and nutritious meals have already taken grounds as impeccable strategies among Indians to lead the entitled healthy and prosperous life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, if, look, similarly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40616246499 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89614181419 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.6485221907 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.857142857 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0933791962094 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300356529047 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352982421689 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0628763606427 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307209177735 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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