the line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999 the bar chart shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999
The line graph provides information about changes in the number of UK citizens who visited abroad and the number of foreigners who came to the UK between 1974 and 1999, whilst the bar chart represents the rating of five tourist destinations which were preferred by the UK residents in 1999.
Overall, it can be seen that the visitors to and from the UK English and France was the most preferred tourist place by the UK residents in 1999.
According to the line graph, the number of UK residents who visited foreign countries was higher than the later and it remained higher for the given time period. There was rapid increase in the number of visitors from the UK from 12 millions in 1979 to 20 millions in 1984. From1964 to 1999 they followed a similar pattern of increase at around 10 millions increase in every 5 years and it reach at about 50 millions in 1999. Similarly, the number of visitors to the UK rose significantly from 10 millions in 1979 to near 30 millions in 1999.
From the bar chart, it is clear that France was the most favourite tourist destination of the UK residents at more than 10 millions of visitors. The second most visited place by the UK people was Spain, which had around 10 millions of visitors. However, the USA, Greece and Turkey had less number of visitors when compared to the other two countries at 4, 3 and 2 millions. respectively.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reaches'?
Suggestion: reaches
...llions increase in every 5 years and it reach at about 50 millions in 1999. Similarly...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 121, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '10 million'.
Suggestion: 10 million
...nation of the UK residents at more than 10 millions of visitors. The second most visited place...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 220, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '10 million'.
Suggestion: 10 million
...e UK people was Spain, which had around 10 millions of visitors. However, the USA, Greece and ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 374, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Respectively
...r two countries at 4, 3 and 2 millions. respectively.
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, similarly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 246.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58536585366 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55395864086 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463414634146 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 326.7 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.2731141511 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.333333333 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400189915425 0.215688989381 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181196585541 0.103423049105 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851951003682 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268357750509 0.15604864568 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386358019982 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reaches'?
Suggestion: reaches
...llions increase in every 5 years and it reach at about 50 millions in 1999. Similarly...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 121, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '10 million'.
Suggestion: 10 million
...nation of the UK residents at more than 10 millions of visitors. The second most visited place...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 220, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '10 million'.
Suggestion: 10 million
...e UK people was Spain, which had around 10 millions of visitors. However, the USA, Greece and ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 374, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Respectively
...r two countries at 4, 3 and 2 millions. respectively.
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, similarly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 246.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58536585366 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55395864086 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463414634146 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 326.7 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.2731141511 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.333333333 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400189915425 0.215688989381 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181196585541 0.103423049105 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851951003682 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268357750509 0.15604864568 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386358019982 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.