The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980 write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below
The bar chart illustrates the number of prisoners in the 5 countries namely Great Britain, Australia, New Zealand, Canada and the United States from 1930 to 1980.
overall it is clear from the chart that the highest figure for imprisonment was in the USA for almost all years, whereas the great Britain had less number of prisoners.
Taking a closer look, from 1930 to 1980 the number of prisoners in the USA was for higher than other countries. Initially, they had hundred prisoners and it increased to 140 in 1980, after a 50 years period. The second highest was Canada at 120 in 1930 whereas decreased to around 90 in 1980.
In contrast, Great Britain, Australia and New Zealand had almost similar figures as well as they had the less number of prisoners. In 1930,
Great Britain had around 30 prisoners and which increased to 80 in 1980. In 1980, Britain and Newzealand had the almost similar figure at above 80, whereas Australia's number decreased to around 50.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...d the United States from 1930 to 1980. overall it is clear from the chart that the hig...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...an other countries. Initially, they had hundred prisoners and it increased to 140 in 1...
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Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s. Initially, they had hundred prisoners and it increased to 140 in 1980, after a...
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Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ners and which increased to 80 in 1980. In 1980, Britain and Newzealand had the al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, second, so, well, whereas, as for, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77976190476 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48201438516 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 220.5 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7812341371 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.375 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138923311349 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734096225958 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394112819431 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894901439631 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375425148989 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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