living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Living in overseas an make some problems in the social and practical aspects. Even though there are a limited number of problems occur, when live in a foreign country, it can be mitigated by learning and coping with the foreign language. So, I tend to believe that it's not a serious problem.
First of all, cultural sickness is a major problem we felt in the initial period of the fly off to the foreign countries. In detail, the change in the language acts as a barrier for the communication, which leads to social isolation. Moreover, there are some practical problems such as difficult to take part in the job because most of the colleagues should be speak in their language. In short, it's difficult to cope with the situation initially.
On the other hand, we should learn the language as a survival technique to cope with the situation after few period of arrival. For example, the people who go abroad learn the foreign language very fastly because it is necessary for them to stay there. Similarly, by adjusting with new culture and technique available there, it's easy to cope with the language issue. Thus, in my opinion, speak a foreign language is not a fence for the people who take effort to overcome this issue and it won't be a social issue even it cause some practical problems.
To conclude, speaking a foreign language is somewhat difficult in the initial periods only, then we will learn to cope with the situation by mingling with the people and colleagues in the work site.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
Living in overseas an make some problems in the social and pr...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...itigated by learning and coping with the foreign language. So, I tend to believe ...
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Message: Did you mean 'spoke', 'spoken'?
Suggestion: spoke; spoken
...ecause most of the colleagues should be speak in their language. In short, its diffic...
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Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...e and it wont be a social issue even it cause some practical problems. To conclude, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, similarly, so, then, thus, for example, in short, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70992366412 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55200555608 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511450381679 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3034351986 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.833333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258962346251 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100564831307 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490464195782 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169719461531 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634913072293 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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