Individual greed and selfishness have been the basis of the modern society. some people think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respect for the family and the local community to create a better world to live in to what extent do you agree or disagree
Today we see in the world of egoism the importance of self interest, which does not pay for human emotions. Some people argue that for a peaceful and happy life in the world as well as within the family, we must go back to the traditional values and ethics. In my opinion, it is essential to remove the materialistic attitude from our society.
To begin with, most of the people in the 21st century behave in an respectful and rude manner to the older people and the community. In detail, today, youth are not aware about the importance of respect, whereas they only bothered about their life. For example, in the past there was a value for the decisions that took by the parents or the elder people in the family but in the current era,children do whatever they like to do.
In addition, present days most of the people are envious about the development of others, which may lead to the crimes. The people never concern about the traditional values such as respect, love, honesty as well as non- violence have no role in today's life. The crime reports in the mass media are the best example for this. Most of the murders are held because of the selfishness of a person. As a result of this the people do crimes to be success in their business or their activity.
To conclude, when compared with the past we are living in a dangerous situation, where no trust and honesty between each other due to the lack of traditional values. Therefore, we must retake and continue the ancestors values and traditions to develop a trustworthy and helpful society and family in our world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 65, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...he people in the 21st century behave in an respectful and rude manner to the older...
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Line 2, column 391, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , children
...ple in the family but in the current era,children do whatever they like to do. In addi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58303886926 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48095292594 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554770318021 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4080972994 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7692307692 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258599061414 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817764951119 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661251892011 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151162932698 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287929815094 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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