Individual greed and selfishness have been the basis of modern society.
Some people think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live.
Discuss these points of view and come to your own conclusion
In this modern era where most successful people are relatively at a young age. As a result, their ambition tends to hunger for wealth. While some people argue that materialism and egoism in person are the basis of modern civilizations, others tend to believe that modern citizens must learn a lesson from older citizens in order to create a better world to live in. This essay will discuss the debate and put forward a concluding view.
On the one hand, those who support modern civilizations tend to hunger for wealth and egoism, might argue that this is a normal condition to live in 21th-century. Because having a good life in the 21st-century era tends to be a high cost of living. Examples can be seen in many successful people right now who are relatively at a young age, which means young citizens tend to have a high ambition, and they are hungry of wealth and egocentrism. However, younger citizens seem to be inexperienced rather than older generations. On that account, at some point younger citizens might need support from the elderly.
On the other hand, opponents of materialism and egoism are the basis of modern civilizations, believe that the young generations must return to the older and learn a lesson about their ancestors'. In this case, the elderly citizens are wiser than young people, because they have a lot of experience and know how to act in local communities.
Overall, I would tend to side with the opponents of young citizens who must learn a lesson about their ancestors’ value to create a better world to live in.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rmal condition to live in 21th-century. Because having a good life in the 21st-century ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8171641791 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69819983635 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485074626866 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9845861225 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.583333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198984121826 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723410932514 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636987734195 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137610523423 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539597150051 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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