Individuals greed and selfishness has been the basis of the society . some people think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respect for the family band the local community in order to create a better world to live in. To what extent do you agree and disagree?
Having the fundamental values is very importent, whether people live in modern Society of traditional society. Even though umpteenth people reckon that masses should follow older virtue, after adopting modern culture, it seems really hard to switch into ancient time. In this essay, iam largely agreed that people should pay attention to their older culture in order to make a batter would
Commencing with the most salient reason why people ought to take into account to our traditional values. First and foremost fact is that with the assistance of following traditional method. people can strength to the relationship, which has now reached at verge level. To explain it, since 21st century has begum, people do not only have quality of time to spend with their families, but also dearth of love in their relationship. This might be because, in order to earn hefty amount of money, either people to work till the death or want to grave king size life. Due this profile neither can manage their work balance nor can give adequate Time the their families for making strong bonding.
However, despite having some millages of moving to ancestor lifestyle, many drawbacks cannot be overlooked by people. Even if people may change the thinking of some particular societies, but people cannot Change the prospective of holistic world. As if people want to go foot by foot, people will have to adopt new culture instead of oldest. As a result, Changing world is not a easy task for people.
In conclusion, although traditional values give a sense of pleasure and spread the feeling of love among people, 21st Century has also its own values, which makes life more easier than pervious time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'commence'
Suggestion: Commence
...ulture in order to make a batter would Commencing with the most salient reason why people...
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Line 2, column 191, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...stance of following traditional method. people can strength to the relationship, which...
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Line 2, column 647, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...work balance nor can give adequate Time the their families for making strong bonding. H...
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Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...est. As a result, Changing world is not a easy task for people. In conclusion, ...
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Line 4, column 169, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...s also its own values, which makes life more easier than pervious time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, really, so, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98936170213 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4061923409 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645390070922 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1312765329 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.230769231 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172396306876 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617121657123 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401847278121 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993945491342 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322353915237 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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