Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?.
The machines were invented to make any work quickly and easily and the technology is being grown day by day. Many household works that were being done manually earlier have been replaced by machines and can be completed automatically. This development has benefitted the people a lot. This essay will explain how technology has helped the people in different ways at home.
The man has invented many machines which can do most of the household work automatically such as; dishwasher, vacuum cleaner, washing machine and so on and by this, he can do the work by consuming less time. With the invention of these machines, the women have some leisure time for themselves as well as their kids. And also this advancement has helped the women in improving their standard of living. They will get more time to focus on their career which they had always dreamt of fulfilling.
Along with the advantages there also some disadvantages that go with the situation, by the invention of this machinery the people are fully dependent on them unlike before where people used to do all the household works manually and they would be fit and healthier. But the advancement of technology has made people lazy. There is no physical involvement is household activities
To sum up everything, the technology has made the people to depend more on the machines for household work more than making it manually. Also, the advantage is that the females can invest their time more on their career and their children rather than only doing household chores.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94594594595 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64165471235 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5905455232 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21030645771 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759205206079 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664947214638 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129044710829 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752103893148 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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