Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Different cultures have been a point of disagreement over the history. There are people who want all tourists coming to their country follow their local cultures. Some others, however, believe that host countries should not make them obey their musts. I partly agree with first group idea. </b>
Host countries should try to prepare the best leisure time for visitors. However, sometimes especial sticky local cultures make tourists uncomfortable and prevent them from traveling to those countries again which is harmful to the tourism. Grabbing tourists' attention not only is useful economically, but also helps countries widen their culture and introduce their history or natural sceneries to the world. Beside, tourism increases plenty of side jobs for example local markets, hotels and taxis thrive through tourism. In this regard, countries should not be too sticky about the forbidden rules or musts in their cultures.</b>
On the other hand, people who travel to another country as tourists should be careful not to break their rules. They should prepare themselves for the destination's culture with which they have to deal. If tourists were allowed to follow their own culture which was against the host country's culture, the host country's culture would be influenced and face culture clash problems over years. Therefore, soon or late they would lose their original culture. For instance, in our country women have to wear hejab. It might not be pleasure for tourists who want to enjoy their freedom in their holydays. However, not wearing hejab is extremely unacceptable in our country and we expect them to obey our rule.</b>
All in all, although it is host countries' responsibility to provide a great memory for tourists, in my opinion tourists must respect their host as well.
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- In many countries these days the number of people continuing their education after school has increased and the range of courses available at universities and colleges has also increased Do you think this as a positive or negative development 73
- Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urists must respect their host as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22916666667 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51902483337 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2835385875 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263118500861 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938692089683 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726837007834 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173066017911 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452941255649 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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