You have recently visited a local school in your community. It needs people who can help renovate the building and also help with some activities. Write a letter to the principal of the school and say
– How would you be able to help?
– When and why would you do it?
– Who will help you to do it?
Dear Sir,
I am Jot and I am a resident of Sector-22b, Chandigarh. I would like to let you know that last time when I visited your school to drop my nephew I read a notice on the notice board saying you are looking for people who can voluntarily help in the renovation of the academic building. I would like to contribute to this restoration work.
Currently, I am working as a Civil Engineering in a reputed HTCL company. Being from the construction background I can figure out planning, designing and budget need for construction. I can do more than this for you, by introducing you to some of our local logistics suppliers from whom you can purchase all the raw material at a cheap price.
Don’t mind but in my opinion, the upcoming summer vacations will be the perfect time for the repair and reconstruction work as there will be no academic classes scheduled for this time slot. I can also add this work to my corporate social responsibility report will enhance my companies brand value.
I and my whole team are always available at your disposal. Being a senior supervisor, I will instruct them to contact you to know your needs and kind suggestions. I hope you will not deny the proposal.
Please write me back and let me know when can I meet you personally for discussing the details if are agree with above proposal.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 6, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'jotted'.
Suggestion: Jotted
Dear Sir, I am Jot and I am a resident of Sector-22b, Chan...
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Line 10, column 103, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...nally for discussing the details if are agree with above proposal. Yours Faithfully,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, you know, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68049792531 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84500887788 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605809128631 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6299194577 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7692307692 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300713095705 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901043753228 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940558145474 0.0603063233224 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155719070233 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843890988377 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.