In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address this situation?
There is a statement that young generations in many countries are now very passionate in making money and being healthy so that they could live longer to enjoy their life, but are not necessarily happier, despite all the material possessions that they have. I would argue that this opinion is true and we need to take some steps to deal with this situation.
With the integration and the world development in all of the aspects, youngsters nowadays enthusiasm in finding money for the finance of their family and their needs. However, many of young people said that they are not happy with their life. Many of them have been into depression. For instance, in a data report last year, nearly 90% of young people who just graduated had to work overtime. This cause them a lot of stresses and they do not have time to enjoy their life. In Japan, more than 60% is in depression and come to suicide.
This is a very dangerous problem and we need to stop it. First, government need to put a restrict working time. People need to hang out and relax after work to find their joy and enjoy their life. Second, companies should sometimes open parties, social or sport events. This will bring more happiness and social interaction into their lives of today’s youth. Finally, young people should arrange their schedule carefully, not working all the time but they should spend time with their relatives and for their hobbies.
In conclusion, government and companies should care more about their employees feeling and young people need to know how to enjoy their live before too late.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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... stop it. First, government need to put a restrict working time. People need to hang out a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78021978022 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36274810201 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549450549451 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1247024244 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171940594276 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629477315976 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558076384326 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120368539239 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052938231645 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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