Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Friendship is one of the most important relationships during ones' life. This relation sometimes lasts for many decades with profound emotional feelings which may be as important as the family relations. Students are mostly more influenced by their freinds rather than their teachers as friends are in the same age, spend more time together and have same levels in society.
First, the fact that same-aged friends have better relations is obvious. Students feel closer to their friends than their teachers as their feelings and thinking are similar to each other; they understand each other better and even rely on their friends more than anyone. Students tend to talk about their secrets to their friends rather than their teachers who they feel shy when talking to.
Second, the students spend more times with their friends than their teachers. They meet their friends everyday; even sometimes they arrange to meet themselves at the weekends and have fun time together. Comparing this long time to only few hours that teachers are in touch with students in a week reveals that the relationship between close friends is more intimidate which makes an influencing environment.
Third, as students are in the same level between in society, they feel free interacting with each other; While a teacher has a higher social level than students and have the power to blame students due to the faults they do. Such situation desings somehow a feary atmosphere in which students do not find their teacher close to them. The more friendly atmosphere a teacher provides for students, the more influence he may have to the students. Although some teachers tend to make a real cool atmosphere in their class, still students feel much free with their friends.
In conclusion, friends are more potential to influence each other than their teacher can do. The same age, time duration and the equal level of social position students have results in more influence they receive from each other. It is important for students to choose their friends correctly as they can help themselves achieve much more
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, still, third, while, even so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07558139535 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42747005558 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473837209302 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.52454695 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.125 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380457173185 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165382751687 0.076458572812 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105017432101 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262547449278 0.150856017488 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367838890572 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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