The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies rather than on positive developments is harmful to the individuals and the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Today, media such as news and current affairs deals more with hot issues which are provocative and violent. some people think that there are definitely several negative effects on individuals and our society. The opponents, on the other hand, argue that there are some benefits that people can learn a positive lesson from it. This essay will illustrate both viewpoints surrounding this issue, before coming to a reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, there are some people who hold the view that current events on the media are excessively suggestive and it is harmful to our children that they can mimic some violent behaviours. To illustrate, in school holiday, some adolescents imitate criminal events of the news that robbing poverty to demonstrate their deviation. However, I believe that these people argue unreasonable theory and it just based on a few cases. In other words, negative reports can help not only individuals but also our society to be positively developed.
As I mentioned before, there are opponents of the former viewpoints as well. these people present several arguments but the most persuasive one is perhaps that broadcasting emergency news such as pandemic diseases can be an opportunity to protect ourselves. This is evidenced by the fact that it reduced fatality rates by developing medications and hygiene skills when viruses such as SARS and Coronavirus spread all over the world. Another point often made by this position is that we can be acquired the problem-solving skills from it and apply it to other fields including law. By understanding problems showing on the media, individuals can alter the rule which cannot safeguard our lives. To illustrate, a number of traffic laws have been changed based on children-related incidents.
To sum up, it can be observed that there are two contradicting viewpoints in relation to media contents. Although the media broadcast various violent and suggestive news, we can turn it into an opportunity for learning and development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, well, such as, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2600619195 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91070083583 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575851393189 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9820026681 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.1875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136691318927 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427860200181 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370441420837 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828452288866 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0140379052375 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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