people are more satisfied with different tasks instead of similar tasks in a workday
Every body spends big amounts of times of their day for work. It is important to be satisfy at work to go to the job every day. I believe that having variety of tasks makes the job more interesting to me although some believe otherwise.
I think variation reduces the bordom and increases the workers cababilities.
First, people got bored easy when there is no challenge at work. they feel that they are mechines and could be substitued with a mechine. we need to learn as much as we can to grow. learning different types of tasks bring more excitement and reduces the bordom. For example, my mom was working in a company that should check the numbers every day. She did not have enough desire to go after a while because the work was the same and she should do the same everyday. No innovation or other tasks was her part. time was always long for her at work and she was not satisfy with that similar task day by day. That was the reason she started to look for another job with having different tasks. eventhough the pay was less in the new job, she went to work with more enthusiasm. That is why I think having different tasks is a good way of satisfaction.
Also, we learn through our experiences. any tasks could teach us something and this improves our capabilities and potential for growth.even the company also benefit from multitasking as well. because employees are more flexible and more capable of doing tasks. If something happen to someone, the company would not compromise and the job would be more flexible to the employee who needs some help.Therfore, the flexibility reduces the pressure both in employee and employer.
In conclusion, although having different tasks brings more challanges, in the long run brings more satisfaction and productivity. not only it reduces the bordom and tedious in the work place, but also improves our creativity and capabilities.
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- TOEFL T P O 40 Integrated Writing Task 3
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- TPO 45 Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In the past young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives U 70
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Learning
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Suggestion: satisfied
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, thus, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75304878049 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66689883947 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521341463415 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4481202976 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2380952381 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.619047619 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09523809524 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261501601674 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078310887653 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783524224851 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120918510651 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808511765157 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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