the table below gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

The table illustrates the proportion of variant goods consumed by five particular nations in the year 2002.
It is immediately obvious that Food/Drinks/Tobaco were the favourite items of every house hold in five different countries, whereas, the least expenditure came from Leisure/Education products.
Looking into details, Food/Drinks/Tobaco were considerably occupied in the year 2002 by Turkey and Ireland, at 32.14% and nearly 29% respectively. Followed by, the rest countries just took approximately 16% of these goods. On the other hand, noticeably, Italy was the country held the highest figure for Clothing/Footwear, with 9% of the consumption and as revealed by the table, the average of number in Ireland, Spain, Turkey were almost touched 7% of Clothing/Footwear. Meanwhile, Sweden certainly not interested in this field, held the least amount of goods, at 5.40%. Last but not least, the highest percentage of Leisure/Education belonged to Turkey, roughly 4.35% which being twice as much as the expenditure of Ireland( 2.21%) and Spain (1.98%). Remarkably, the amount of values was almost equal between Italy and Sweden, at 3%

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Average: 8.5 (3 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...house hold in five different countries. Whereas, the least expenditure came from Leisur...
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Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ountries just took approximately 16% of this goods. On the other hand, noticeably, I...
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Line 3, column 528, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n certainly not interested in this field , held the least amount of goods , at 5.4...
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Line 3, column 561, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s field , held the least amount of goods , at 5.40%. Last but not least, the highe...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, whereas, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54022988506 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.53668422828 2.65546596893 133% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672413793103 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.881690936 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.111111111 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125681795294 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500227866715 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691098931243 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116655094381 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628211045187 0.0819641961636 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...house hold in five different countries. Whereas, the least expenditure came from Leisur...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ountries just took approximately 16% of this goods. On the other hand, noticeably, I...
^^^^
Line 3, column 528, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n certainly not interested in this field , held the least amount of goods , at 5.4...
^^
Line 3, column 561, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s field , held the least amount of goods , at 5.40%. Last but not least, the highe...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, whereas, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54022988506 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.53668422828 2.65546596893 133% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672413793103 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.881690936 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.111111111 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125681795294 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500227866715 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691098931243 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116655094381 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628211045187 0.0819641961636 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.