Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate.Discuss both views and give your oppinion.
In this day and age, it is the fact that people have different views about some debates around museums.Some that museums should be organized in the forms of entertainment to attract people, whereas others suppose that building museums for the sack of educating and studying .From my point of view, better people, museums should be built in an entertaining way in order to make an impression on people.
On the one hand, the factors enable people to believe that the aim of museum is only to research and study simply because they think that museums are just places in order to provide people with the wealth of informative knowledge about events in the past. And Finally people pay a visit to museums to learn not to entertain.In addition to that,they suppose that museums are not suitable to take the chill pill or blow off some steam.These are the reasons being attributable to this trend.
On the other hand, I am in favor of the opinion that people have a tendency to like the kind of museums as pleasurable places.Firsly, people surely have a good mood or excited mood when going to the museum since they can both enjoy the breathtaking views by the way the museums deecorate enjoyably around which do not go to the other place to visit .Furthermore, they can broanden their horizon and enrich their knowledge without ease or tension.Like for instance , when people is in need of finding appropriate site to serve their learning and relaxation.You know , nothing is better than when choosing museums as you not only have change of scenery but also gain information a lot.
In conclusion, It occurs to me that I strongly believe that it is a greathing to build the museums in mordern and entertaining way
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, so, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, you know, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79054054054 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71673674266 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543918918919 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.2975951904 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 192.148484251 49.4020404114 389% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 283.6 106.682146367 266% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.2 20.7667163134 285% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.0 7.06120827912 397% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417704324655 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218963123264 0.084324248473 260% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518787384289 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238958369624 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665466075476 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.7 13.0946893788 234% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.05 50.2224549098 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.39 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.1190380762 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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