obestiy is an increasing concern in majority of the nations today.
To what extent do you agreee.
Undoubtedly, invasive increase in count of fatty people is one of the major concerns for several countries. I cogitate that proliferation in the numbers of obese people is gravitating countless chronic diseases and the supremacy has to squander its lion's share of its budget to endow health-related services to cure obesity-related ailments.
Since sedentary lifestyle has blessed the humanity with ample comforts and luxuries, human body has become quite inactive and lethargic. Consequently, this sluggish lifestyle has made the humans prone to myraid of diseases such as cardio vascular disease and diabetes. Seemingly, healthy citizens lay the foundation of healthy nations and if the
citizenry is not healthly, it would put the regimes into a dilemma. Also it is biased to overlook the fact documented by the American Health Council that 90 percent of school-aged children in America have fallen prey to extreme obesity which is a growing concern for the government.
To continue, the regimes have innumerable priorities such as they have to devote a major portion of their annual budget for social and physical infrastructure. However, some nations have to waste colossal amounts of funds in tackling several deadly diseases occurres owing to over weight issues among denizens. To exemplify, as per the survey conducted by WHO, in the gone calendar year, burgeoning patients of obesity has forced the authority to invest a hefty part of their precious income on health careindustry to curb this menace.
In conclusion, in order to save the morrow of nation which is healthy dwellers from severe effects of obesity, the regimes have to spend a lot which is just sheer wastage of resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, look, so, well, as for, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31734317343 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89542596351 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634686346863 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.917111335 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.1 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0753576268832 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313008460728 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409490165339 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.037788485883 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177467066212 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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