People have different views about the advanced education systems that should be supported by authorities, while some argue that it is would be better for students to feed the tuition themselves. While I am in favor of the former opinion, I am going to delve into both views in this essay.
On the one hand, there are a large number of benefits if students in a higher class are paid the school fee by the government. Firstly, in general, the tuition in the higher class is much more than a lower education system therefor citizens may have more chances to join in an advanced class. Secondly, in some developed countries, students have to take out a bank loan for studying universities, if they save a part budget from the support of government, they can reduce the amount of student's debt and help them put more attention to their study.
On the other hand, the downsides of tuition remission are varied, From some people's perspective, it is true that the payment for the student will press the burden on the national budget, hence, the government has to put the higher tax on some fields. Moreover, students may take the school's fees for granted seem to be not responsible adequate for their study, it led the output education quality lower.
In conclusion, to harmony between the advantages and the drawback of this funded, I think the government should only reduce the cost of education, increase the scholarship for prominent students or free tuition for underprivileged students instead of remission on a whole scale.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...this essay. On the one hand, there are a large number of benefits if students in a higher class ...
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Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...tuition remission are varied, From some peoples perspective, it is true that the paymen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, as to, i think, in conclusion, in general, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85823754789 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68616533592 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570881226054 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.4027994164 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.5 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.625 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.875 7.06120827912 253% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267919731552 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114818642569 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618792114696 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163763821796 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690244499053 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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