The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialise.
In the modern life, it is an undeniable fact that internet has a huge effects on several aspects, especially on communicating with each other. However, some people still believe that due to the existence of internet, we are becoming isolated and lack of vital social skills day by day, To a certain extent, I would agree with the stunning functions of technology on connecting each other, but somewhat, I also approve of the opinion about its negative influence.
On one hand, the internet definitely play an indispensable role in helping humanities interact and correspond. First, keeping in touch is obviously necessary for people and corporations.Internet bring us a more efficient and effective way to connect, for not only chatting but also meeting and studying online, without the boundaries of distance and cost. For example, today, when the government urge everybody to stay at home to counteract the Corona Virus, there are thousands of companies, classes or groups are continue their progress by connecting with other people through some apps like google meetings or zooms. Second, people's networking is also expanded via internet, bringing them far from their place to the other country. There are a huge of media sites such as facebook, instagram, etc connected people from different areas for their own benefits: business, studying or just for a whole new friendship, which are being utilised by individuals all over the world. Therefore, if mankind know how to control themselves, use the internet wisely and effectively, they will gain particular advantages.
On the other hand, internet is also double-edged due to the fact that it led to isolation and the other social life problems of human. Nowadays, almost everyone has their own smart phone, from the young to the old, finding attractions from the entertaining applications. Many users, especially the youngsters, are spending too much time browsing the webs, playing online game, chatting with virtual friends, sticking with their gadget for hours. As a result, less time could be spent for an eye to eye contact with the other family members and real friends. Not only be addicted to information technology, they also lose numerous of essential social skills, eventually face health problems related to eyes.
To sum it up, the internet bring lots of advantages to our life, but they go along with drawbacks. Nevertheless, I assume that we should control ourselves, gain benefits from internet in an efficient way without overuse it. In addition, don not let themselves be lack of any social skills in daily life, not in the virtual one
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- The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are On the other hand it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialise 89
- The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are On the other hand it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialise 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ndeniable fact that internet has a huge effects on several aspects, especially on commu...
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Line 1, column 268, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'skills'' or 'skill's'?
Suggestion: skills'; skill's
...oming isolated and lack of vital social skills day by day, To a certain extent, I woul...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Internet
...y necessary for people and corporations.Internet bring us a more efficient and effective...
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Line 3, column 516, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'continued'.
Suggestion: continued
...nds of companies, classes or groups are continue their progress by connecting with other...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...face health problems related to eyes. To sum it up, the internet bring lots o...
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Line 7, column 186, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient way" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... ourselves, gain benefits from internet in an efficient way without overuse it. In addition, don no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, therefore, as for, for example, in addition, in particular, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2195.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17688679245 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.865556332 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599056603774 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 675.0 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.05619566 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.1875 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1875 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2935929316 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883742066348 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719007184754 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169775526647 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694769927891 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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