Environmental problems are becoming a major complication issue among all the continent of western world.However,Some folks believe, these problems are affecting plants and animal species whilst other people conceive that this tendency has had more adverse effects.There may be merit of both cases.According to me, this statement need proper scrutinization before forming any opinion.
To embark on,plants and animals are being extinct from last few decades due to pollution and green house gases emits from the several kinds of factories which eventually create detrimental impact on numerous species.Moreover,people are cutting the forests woods and making the corporate sector for the better development of the notion.As a result, this tendency are snatching the freedom of animal to live and reducing the proportion of plants and nature.Furthermore,In business sector, Civilians are killing animals for their benefits and business.To exemplify;- the production of Cosmetics and leather products are rely on several kinds of animal skins and other body parts.In addition, Climate changes like floods and droughts also destroying the marine life and rare sea species.
Having said that,There is also an another side,Humans beings are also facing difficulties due to ecological problems like air pollution and water pollution.Individuals do not able to get fresh air and having breathing issues in metro cities due to heavy pollution and smog created by transportation services.A survey of times of India revealed,45 percent of Indians have several health issues such as,asthma, cancer and heart diseases,due to environment and climate change.In addition,farmers have been dying since beginning across the world because of land degradation as they do not able to produce crops and food for them.Hence forth, it also create an atmosphere of poverty and starvation.
After contemplating the subjected matter,I can conclude my vision that environmental problems may destroy the plant and animal species, but in sharp contrast this trend is also affecting the humans very deeply and creating a sense of fear among societies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69811320755 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36244555483 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660377358491 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 79.0 20.2975951904 389% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 216.513712037 49.4020404114 438% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 453.0 106.682146367 425% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 79.5 20.7667163134 383% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.0 7.06120827912 340% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162034710845 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108271024664 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754308039622 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108271024664 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754308039622 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.2 13.0946893788 345% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -25.63 50.2224549098 -51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.5 11.3001002004 323% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.96 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.72 8.58950901804 148% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.6 10.1190380762 332% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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