Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.
Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion
Some people think that parents should devote more time helping their children with schoolwork. Others think that they should alloccate more time to playing sports with their kids. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
it is a common belief that parents should invest more time helping their children with schoolwork. However, there is a more persuasive argument that spending time playing sports with children is more imperative.
To begin with, parents helping their child is an effective way for him or her to demonstrate outstanding academic performance. Nowadays, teachers tend to give their students some tasks that students have to deal with by themselves. Obviously, by assisting their children with any problem they face in work, parents are able to help their child to feel that the homework is more easy than ever. For example, providing kids with a sum of ideas may help him or her to escape from struggle situation and achieve great results.
In fact, a recent study shows that children expresses their opinions more when parents create a relaxed environment by playing sports with them. First of all, joining in sport activities may improve both physical and mental healt, which are really important to better build a happy life. In addition, devote more time playing sports is one of the ways to push emotional attachment between child and parents. Take the example of working parents who always busy with their work and hardly able to have freetime with children, spending time on physical activities is advised to have a family gathering so that all members have more chances to share about things that confused them.
To sum up, while it is apparent that parents should allocate time helping children with their homework but dovote time playing sports with kids is much more important. parents had better together solve exercises with child when it is really neccesary in order not to make child stressed out while being taken care much of studying.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, really, so, while, for example, in addition, in fact, first of all, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0412371134 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42693929967 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560137457045 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8129705554 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.25 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0472375011694 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0226182371811 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0192404681925 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0310618007044 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169943001904 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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