People think that children nowadays have more freedom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In modern society today it is generally believed that children are having more freedom than those in the past. In my view, to a certain extent, they do have the freedom to do some things that their parents and grandparents were probably not allowed to do in the past, I almost support this view.
First of all, it is undeniable that parents today are snowed under and pressured by a lot of work because our society is becoming rapidly competitive and progressive. As a result, they do not have enough time to spend with their children back home. In other words, parents do not understand psychology as well as problems that their kid are facing. This leads to children almost decide everything affect their life, from what to eat for breakfast to which secondary school they will study. Therefore, it is not an overstatement to say that children in this day and age are technically treated like adults.
Next, technology is developing like a rocket in life today, so it is not difficult to own a technological product with many functions such as entertainment, communication, learning, etc. With more freedom than children tend to confine themselves to the virtual worlds of computer games and social networking sites. They voluntarily narrow their worlds to a handful of platforms, like Instagram, Facebook and online games, with their lives centred around updating their status, posting selfies and being involved in online virtual warfare, and as a result, they are becoming enslaved to such platforms.
In conclusion, children these days are indeed free of some restrictions, however, have to deal with other issues related to modern times. Good parenting should aim to give children both extended freedom and, at the same time, protect them from other potential hazards that lurk in our modern day societies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06312292359 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72488040734 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584717607973 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.0519905693 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19312828066 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768534935357 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650023420557 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126364961212 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785857295046 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.