Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's technological age, computers are being used in every aspect of life such as business, education, medical and healthcare. As a result, since there is a wealth of information available on the internet, students can study by themselves at home just as effectively as they do at school. This leads to the idea that schools are no longer essential for education. Although the educational benefits of the internet are undeniable, I believe that academic institutions play a vital role in our society and can not be replaced no matter what.
There is no doubt that the internet and technology products have made it easier for users to access a wide range of information. One great way from online newspapers and video websites such as National Geographic and Youtube, which offers a variety of topic areas suitable for people of different ages. Children can learn a great deal of knowledge about culture, science and many other areas which they are taught at school. Furthermore, they can participate in their online courses favourite. This type of learning is even more advantages in the sense that children can flexibly choose to study whatever subjects they are interested in.
Notwithstanding, my conviction is that formal education is irreplaceable in any society. Although students can acquire knowledge at home very easily through the internet, lack of teacher's guidance and peer support is a clear disadvantage to this form of learning. Besides, the school environment is a necessary factor for a child's intellectual development. Not only supply knowledge and skill for students but also help them have social relationships and mental development. Children who go to school and establish friendships can both have fun and improve their learning outcomes.
In conclusion, the internet is a good way to study at home but if students do not go to school they will overlook immeasurable benefits of the school environment brings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, look, so, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1974522293 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01273212049 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589171974522 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9767826367 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.8 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341936830548 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105832939546 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972809239472 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206171143731 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591153861827 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.