People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less
Global population is in an increasing consumption rate of sugar-base drinks. one of the main reasons is that food industry has included it in the majority of their products. I think that the most viable solution to fight against this unfair issue, is to educate people about the risks of its consumption.
one of the main reasons why food industry uses great amounts of sugar is that this tiny crystal is able to modify flavors when mixed with other ingredients. food industry had found in sugar a cheap ingredient which allows them to develop new products with incredible sweet flavours that people would always buy. The huge amount of suggar that humans are drinking brings as a result a society with cronic diabetes issues. For example, in USA, where the 23% of all of the sugar market is consumed, more than 60% of their population is having diabetes or pre-diabetes issues.
The most viable solution is for governments to implement a mass media campaing in orther to led people know about the risks of sugar consumption. The reason is that by giving the appropiate information to people about the riks of sugar consumption, then, people would not include it on their shopping. For example, the government in Chile launched a campaign 5 years ago where every single aliment that is being sold within their territory will have in a third of the product main image the percentage of added suggar. this action bring as a result a 10% decresement of diabetes cases after 5 years.
In conclusion, although, food industry adds suggar in the majority of their products bringing as a result a cronic diabetes society, governments should start developing media campaings in order to led their citizens know about the drawbacks that sugar comsumtion has.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, third, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97972972973 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63741239092 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550675675676 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6315811404 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.833333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189347349859 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690921198234 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477339217784 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109070891496 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526230653513 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.