Nowadays it is not only large companies that can make films. Digital technology enables anyone to produce films. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Technology development is playing an important role in our daily life. Filming is impacted considerably by the evolution of camera technology. People can easily make films by using their own cellphone which several years before its functions is calling and messaging. Not only large companies but also individual people can record a film. Some people claim that it will bring many disadvantages to entertainment industry while others give their opposite sight. From my point of view, I strongly agree with the statement that anyone can produce film is a positive development.
Firstly, people can capture every moments in their lives and it create many new trends over the world. Large companies using their special tools such as background, expensive cameras and they invite many celebrities to play a role in their films. These films cost a great amount of money and times to establish a cinematic movies for their selling all over the world. In contrast, normal people's films may cost much less money, time and people. These films can be posted on various platforms such as Facebook, Youtube, Tik Tok and many more social network. Moreover, cinematic films usually using old motive like superhero, action film with many VFXs, comedy and many more that could be not show the real face of the society due to some strict law and is the barrier stop that contents which videos on the Internet are not. Secondly, people can get the films easily on the Internet because many of those are not licensed and the quantity of it is bigger than cinematic movies, they do not need to pay a large amount of money to watch a films. Last but not least, individual filmmakers can build their own career in film industry and many talents are found through social platform. For instance, FAP TV, a Vietnamese channel produce a series of short comedy films which is very famous in Vietnam and they claim over a ten millions subscribers on Youtube.
On the other hand, it also bring negative effect to society. A film without regulations can effect people, especially children who do not have enough awareness to realize which is good, which is bad for them. Children can be damaged by that harmful videos and no parents want that happen. Moreover, various film with awful contents make the web space become too soiled and people do not want that content so that some developer using tool to clean up their network space.
In conclusion, the widespread popularity of freedom filmmakers due to the development in technology bring us many advantages. Although some small detriment still appear, the benefit of development in filming give people more opportunities to watch a quality movies through their smartphone and promote some hidden talents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2274.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 457.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97592997812 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53136457214 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544857768053 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 705.6 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.680442528 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.285714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7619047619 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290058362294 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912592905564 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613151685214 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18354193314 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743243625268 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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