Throughout history male leaders always lead us to violence and conflict If a society is governed by female leaders it will be more peaceful To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion
Leader is a person who need to have a good dignity to lead a group of people. Look back the history, most of the leader are male and people start to claim that male politicians bring the aggression and clash to community. Female leadership will avoid the violence and keep the peacefulness for society. From my point of view, I strongly disagree with the above statement. I believe that gender is not decide how chaotic the world is.
Firstly, the conflict and violence between people is formed when community has the hate with the others and the war is arrived when the hatred is at the peak. For example, World War 2 happened when Nazi wants to expand their influence, resources and market share due to many reasons. The war cause millions of deaths, many are innocent people and the leader during the war is male. Hitler, Hirohito and Mussolini have governed Germany, Japan and Italy during the world. People think that the war are caused by the men because their natural personality and behavior is rampant and bad-tempered. In fact, it is not the main reason of clash and any decision of the leader must please the desire of citizen.
Secondly, conflict often occur when the leader has a bad leadership ability and a hot-head, regardless male or female. The incapability in leading will cause dramatic problem to the country and the trust in government of people will unstable which will lead to demonstration and civil war. For example, in Chile, a million people demonstrate for the disagreement of new regular.
Last but not least, feminine leaders also bring violence to another country. The Queen of England - Victoria starts invading many country such as India, China, South Africa and Australia for new market share, resources and slave. The decision will not depend on what gender there is, the smart strategies and making right decision will lead the stability of society to increase. It would be absolutely wrong if people say man decision would be more negative than women.
In conclusion, the ability to leading country such as right regulation, foreign affairs and building internal power of country will be the key of development, peacefulness and freedom. Gender is not the perspective for people to describe that leader will bring violence and war or bloodless and beautiful world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94845360825 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56727021347 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536082474227 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3149755769 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249953157108 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071775458712 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489317717253 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147743935805 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376829280405 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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