Early year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
It is sad but true, that in recent years adoption of diverse languages have seen a drastic fall resulting in their extinction from the world of literature. Perversely to the fact some do not take it as a point of concern stating that, lesser the jargons available the easier it is to commute on the global level. However, I am strongly on the contradicting opine.
Primarily, languages act as an identity to the sect of people practicing it, by giving them unique stand on the global platform. It is being said that exercising a particular dialect shapes a one's personality and attitude. It is being scientifically proved that the more number of languages an individual speaks the more sharp and intellectual is he as the varied vocabulary helps the brain to think and act in a more flexible and a creative manner. In case if languages start vanishing, respective cultures also will get extinct that plays an essential role in developing scriptures and historical documentations.
However, one should also consider the pros of the respective scenario where in if there are few languages, communities will be at ease in communicating with each other round the globe boosting the trade and commerce thus catalysing the phenomenon of globalisation.
Last but not the least, the cons are far more depressive that the benefits of having lesser languages. A far as I am concerned, governments official and all that are related to the lineage of linguistic nests should formerly do the needful to keep elderly languages enact in order to enrich the cultures and personal development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
It is sad but true, that in juvenile years adoption of diverse languages have seen...
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Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... that, lesser the jargons available the more easier it is to commute on the global level. H...
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Line 2, column 191, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... exercising a particular dialect shapes a ones personality and attitude. It is be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99591836735 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99305318144 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624489795918 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7637185953 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.4 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16667638029 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534599097978 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307370446025 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850416969789 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303954677773 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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