Foreign languages should be compulsory in primary school. How far do you agree with the above statement? Write an essay and express your opinion.
People these days are becoming more interested in learning multiple languages and this is quite beneficial also for our personal growth. Teaching foreign languages in school is a way of making students multilinguistic, so that they know better about other cultures around the world, however it has some drawbacks too which I will discuss in my essay below.
At the outset, everyone is trying to do something different thes days because no one wants to be ordinary and having knowledge of more than two or more language gives better opportunities. For instance, if primary schools will start giving classes for foreign languages, then this can help students later on in their career because many of these will go abroad for studies and jobs. learning foreign language can make their way easier. Moreover, they can also teach those languages and make it as their career option too.
On the flipside, as it seen that some of the schools are only focusing on foreign languages and giving less weightage to subjects like maths , science and physics. By ignoring such subjects, students can never achieve higher level education, as most of the technical courses are based on these subjects only and this can cause major affect to their career also. To make eductaion system strong and vast management should focus on basic subjects also.
In nutshell, I would say that making internationl languages compulsory in schools is totally fine but primary focus must be on basic subjects and this will help in overall growth of the pupil. I hope all schools will follow this tactic in future to make straong base for young generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0258302583 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52078030962 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60147601476 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7138310282 50.4703680194 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.818181818 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141927655445 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594074694039 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368652723662 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910988890085 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208208166625 0.0609392437508 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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