Some people think that government is wasting money on art and this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?
Art has played a vital role in the rise of the society and countires from the ancient times as, one of the writter have said that if you want to know the country you must study their art and culture first. Governments are also focusing in promoting art, however it is ongoing debate that whether larger amount of money should be invested in art or not. I opine the fact that money should be used wisely in such matters.
In ancient times, kings used to built big structures for them and for their loved ones and best example of this is 'Taj Mahal' but if we talk about today's world, there are many other important factors on which government should concentrate like education and jobs. It seen that governments are building and investing big amount of money on these things and valid example of this is staute of Sardar Vallabhbhai Patel, which is worth around 3000 crores. Government could have started a charity fund in the name of Vallabhbhai Patel to pay tribute to him.
Secondly, administration can start compaigns in which different artists can participate and display there talent rather than just wasting money on making big monuments, parks and other structures. Furthermore, these artists and their works can be shown all around the world, this will enhance spreading of our culture worldwide and this will also invigorate young genertaion to learn something new.
To conclude, I would like to say that art can be promoted by engaging people in the learning of art and giving them well deserved rewards, instead of making different kind of building and statue. I hope ministry will think upon this matter as soon as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84042553191 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46912426155 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606382978723 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.5776317864 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.5 104.977214359 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.9669160288 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251506453386 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948816286602 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316665777311 0.071462118173 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140294996915 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267611036754 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.1260098522 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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