Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Teenage and adulthood are two different times of ones life. While many people thinks that they enjoyed there adolescent years, others opine the fact that adult life is more delightful regardless of responsibilties. Both time period have their own values but if happines is to be considered, then I would choose teenage over middle-aged life.
Teenage is considered to be the happiest time by most of the people and there are many reasons for the same.Firstly, people in their youthful years are less bounded by cares and responsibilties a compared to mature people, as there is no tension of making money and career.For example, Many school trips and parties happens at that moment of life which allows them to enjoy to the fullestwith the friends.
Secondly, there are sheer amount of things which we learn during our teenage. This period of life gives us sense of what to choose for higher studies or career, because pupils get wise enough by the end of their adolescence. This creates lot of confidence and happines of self independence in themselves.
In conclusion, teenage has many reasons to be admired over adulthood, that is why it is most happiest phase of our life cycle.One should enjoy it and make it memorable because time never comes back for us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...nd adulthood are two different times of ones life. While many people thinks that the...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
...and there are many reasons for the same.Firstly, people in their youthful years are les...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...s no tension of making money and career.For example, Many school trips and parties ...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun school seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many schools'.
Suggestion: Many schools
...of making money and career.For example, Many school trips and parties happens at that momen...
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Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...e friends. Secondly, there are sheer amount of things which we learn during our tee...
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Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'happiest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: happiest
...mired over adulthood, that is why it is most happiest phase of our life cycle.One should enjo...
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Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the happiest'.
Suggestion: most the happiest
...mired over adulthood, that is why it is most happiest phase of our life cycle.One should enjo...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: One
...s most happiest phase of our life cycle.One should enjoy it and make it memorable b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94859813084 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71898778518 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621495327103 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.273603443 50.4703680194 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.375 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 20.9669160288 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.25397266985 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230666888068 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909513371204 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688263126564 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132128167787 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846763270553 0.0609392437508 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...nd adulthood are two different times of ones life. While many people thinks that the...
^^^^
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
...and there are many reasons for the same.Firstly, people in their youthful years are les...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...s no tension of making money and career.For example, Many school trips and parties ...
^^^
Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun school seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many schools'.
Suggestion: Many schools
...of making money and career.For example, Many school trips and parties happens at that momen...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...e friends. Secondly, there are sheer amount of things which we learn during our tee...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'happiest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: happiest
...mired over adulthood, that is why it is most happiest phase of our life cycle.One should enjo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the happiest'.
Suggestion: most the happiest
...mired over adulthood, that is why it is most happiest phase of our life cycle.One should enjo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: One
...s most happiest phase of our life cycle.One should enjoy it and make it memorable b...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94859813084 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71898778518 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621495327103 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.273603443 50.4703680194 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.375 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 20.9669160288 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.25397266985 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230666888068 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909513371204 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688263126564 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132128167787 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846763270553 0.0609392437508 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.