Involvement of youth in crimes is increasing at an alarming rate. Throw some light on the causes and possible solutions?
It is non denying fact that youth plays important role in communities. In recent years, it has been seen that the youth played vital role in many developments and inventions. But, there has been sheer amount of increase in the crimes committed by younger generations. In this essay , I will explain causes and solutions with suitable examples.
At the outset, one of the major reasson for crimes done by youth is lack of good and proper education. Because, recently it is claimed that most of the illegal activities are done by the ones, who did not complete the studies or not even had proper eduction. Secondly, lack of jobs is also forcing the youth to involve in such deeds. When the youth gets pressurized by family or relatives for the carrier, then this creates frustration in their minds which automatically leads them to do such crimes.
If I talk about the solutions for this, there are many that can lower the increase of crimes.Firstly, our governments should start making eduction easy and affordable for all the kids, who somehow left their studies due to unavailability of money from their parents.Secondly, there should be proper job placements campaigns by colleges and universities with the help of government.This will create a urge in youth to do something studies and for the countery too.
To conclude, i would say that having skilful youth will increase the standards of the country and it can be only done by the joint efforts of society and government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92828685259 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86852615516 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593625498008 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.670989966 50.4703680194 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 123.7 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158411510481 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667820848007 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368152722761 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091420394616 0.151781067708 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337949697974 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.