You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, sports is getting well-positioned as the ways of entertaining and generating revenue. Although many people believe that a good physical health is the most needed in achieving everything others have dreaming of, mental strength has more impact on success in sport.
On the one hand, there are many reasons why mental strength is the most important factors creating succeed. Lots of athletes are under a lot stress because everybody put outsize expectations into them. As a result, when participating in competitions, they always lose their grip and then trap into distraction as their unwanted emotions are exerting more influence on their mind. Moreover, those who cannot build a growth mindset for happiness is susceptible to abandon their opportunity to tap their talents. For instance, those who are too ambitious and never feel pleasure to everything they have would coach themselves to the point of exhaustion which discourages them join in the prospective competitions.
On the other hand, a good physical health is also really needed. First, playing sports consumes lots of energy in the body. For instance, those who never be on the move as well as working out at the gym will face multiple troubles in making their way when they decided to dedicate their time to sports as they are out of condition. Second, sport professionals who are in the peak of condition will gain the highest wage. Such athletes rarely get life-threatening injuries so instead getting sick leaves to recover they definitely perform at the highest levels in the competition.
Enhancing the ability to achieve success in sports is not easy because it takes a lot of efforts and times. And the key factor to pull of the meal is getting a good mental health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be never
...gy in the body. For instance, those who never be on the move as well as working out at t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, really, second, so, then, well, for instance, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07958477509 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82143385158 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595155709343 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2103460998 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.857142857 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124967307162 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436663412267 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485433698042 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084497214864 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474737987137 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.