Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that a father raises a child by staying at home and it’s the mother who works and earns dimes for the family. This trend is too common in various Westerns and European countries. There are number of reasons for such a positive development and these will be analysed in upcoming paragraphs.
The first and foremost reason is that the culture of nuclear families has been increased during the last few decades due to number of reasons. Consequently, couples are forced to work tirelessly to fulfill their necessities which may cause hurdles while planning for a baby. To explain more, it is well-defined by the law for a woman to take maternity leaves during her pregnancy therefore she usually resists to take more time off from the work post her delivery. As a result of this, the father has to have some time away from work and up bring little one up.
Another clear reason is that more and more people from different parts of the globe are trying to empower women in this 21st century. Although, the world we live in is still a male-dominant world, but the way women have contributed towards the growth of humankind over the past few decades can not be ignored. To elaborate more, there has been a noticeable trend towards increasing the female workforce in various sectors of work which include Corporates jobs, Scientists, Astronauts, Defence, and many more. In a recent survey conducted by an eminent professor Mr. Wolfowitz of Stanford University it was revealed that in the last decade, the percentage of women employees has been rapidly increased from 20% in 2000 to 66% in 2020 in the USA. Hence, it is clear that the father nowadays understands the passion of mother’s dreams and assist her by staying with the child and let her work.
In the end, it can be observed that the trend of a father raising child is not only motivated for the family, but it is also making a positive impact on society as a whole. Henceforth, it would not be wrong to say that this has evolved as a positive development throughout the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 403, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'resists taking'.
Suggestion: resists taking
...ing her pregnancy therefore she usually resists to take more time off from the work post her de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72727272727 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60697192553 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553719008264 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.7394216534 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.571428571 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9285714286 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248487723465 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828526885441 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605731898392 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160782344109 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682749475591 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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