People said that Instead of studying in their country, students should go abroad for higher education. Do you agree or disagree?
These days, many people argue that whether students should go to universities in their country or in foreign nations. In my opinion, I totally agree with the idea that students should have access to educational background for some primary reasons.
Firstly, since developed countries have better education systems and more prestigious univiersities, students who pursue a higher education have a chance to gain better qualifications. Therefore, the ability to getting a well-paid job for fresh graduates is considered as significantly high. For example, many students graduating from Havard and Yale univerisities are every so often recruited, with not only a high-paying package but also a myriad of promotion chances, by well-known corporations around the world. This is conducive to their career ladder later on. If students did not posess a formal qualification overseas, it would be challenging for them to seek a decent job.
Secondly, there is a great benefit to students when studying far away from their families. This advantage is that students are able to become more mature since they have to learn effective ways that allows them deal with problems in their own life while they lack parenting cares. In fact, by going shopping for food and cooking healthy diets for themselves, students might be more confident as they would have more opportunities to practice vitally important skills to survive in real life. The reliance on parents is likely to be unavoidabe when students opt for domestic educational institutions.
In conclusion, I completely believe that going to foreign countries to gain a college degree is a key decision for the future of youngsters because there are many advantages of this.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-04-26 | IVANTRUONG | 73 | view |
- It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- The bar chart below shows the different types of accommodation chosen by the British when they were on holiday in 2012 92
- REDUCING TRAFFIC JAMS Some people believe the government should spend money building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion Others however think that building more and wider roads is a better way to reduce traffic congestion Discuss both view 78
- The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012. 11
- The bar chart compares the figures for 5 different phone brands in terms of sales around the world during a period 4 years. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oblems in their own life while they lack parenting cares. In fact, by going shopp...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24912280702 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90528858367 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617543859649 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5875294497 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.076923077 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289193120101 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105231541657 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575616648386 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182487054225 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762743809776 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.