Scientists predict that in the future cars will be driven by computers.
What are the reasons behind this? Is it a positive or negative development?
it is undeniable that family plays an indispensible part for every people. Nevertheless, in recent years, due to development of society and appearance of numerous economic issues, family structure has become virtually different from the last decades. And this can exert significant influences for daily life of individuals.
Probably, the most radical change is the shifting of extended families towards nuclear households. Increasing of house prices and population density are two primary factors contributing to this tendency. In a society where many people struggle with earning a living and taking care of their children, living in a small group is virtually the only way to reduce the burden of financial difficulty. As a result, families with working mother and single-parent households have become more ubiquitous, especially in city centers. Furthermore, most households nowadays are dual-income, where parents are usually away from home and spend less time with children, leading to the lack of monitoring during their formative years. Facing with this phenomenon, parents are likely to opt for child-minding or afterschool childcare modules, rather than spending less time at work to stay with their children.
Consequently, these changes have exerted indesirable influences on modern families. In terms of children upbringing, family gathering is paramount importance in shaping children’s personal traits and avoid risks of children suffering from social problems. In other words, the less time parents spending with their children, the less opportunities they can absorb conventions and codes of conduct, which may follow them and hopefully lead to successful career. Moreover, being alone at home for a long time without supervision makes children become victimized by bullying, truancy, delinquency. Secondly, disappearance of ties of kinship also induces sense of alienation, especially for those living far away from relatives.
In conclusion, it seems to me that shifting towards nuclear family structures and lacking of role models for children are main changes of role of families compared to the past. this can become substantial drawback for daily life of many people.
- The bar chart below shows the different types of accommodation chosen by the British when they went on holiday in 2010 78
- Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries Why is this the case Is it a positive development 78
- Students should be taught academic knowledge so that they can pass exams and skills such as cooking or dressing should not be taught To what extent do you agree disagree 92
- In recent years the family structure has changed as well as family roles What are the changes occurring Do you think these changes are positive or negative 84
- It is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people than that of young people in many countries in the future Do you think it is a positive or negative development 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67272727273 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00119351832 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612121212121 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.797268884 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0339788052353 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0137807874533 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0182869725732 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0248367977769 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0113244922717 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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