In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more vio-lent.
Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
Nowadays, It is not rare to find a news about crimes on the local paper. Unfortunately, The number of crimes is going to growth as well as become more violent. In my view, this phenomenon is cause by the exchange of world cultures and the government is play the key role to solve this.
As the exist of internet and the development of technology, nations have a big chance to integrate with the world in many fields. Along with the development of various culture, social issues have aborted into many developing countries. For examples, Drug is the reason of several crimes. Not only it brings a unreal emotions that people can not control but also it pushes druger to earn money at all cost to buy them. There are significant criminals who are arrested and commit the crime when they are drugs or because they need money to buy drugs. Moreover, As the increasing of crimes, the violent crimes also growing. Criminals tend to use violent to threaten victims to ensure the successful of crimes.
To solve this problem in society, Government should play the key role. Firstly, a strict regulation about crime should be imposed, so that, the criminals should be strict punishment. The criminals should be so scared of the law that they do not hazard to break the laws. Secondly, Schools and families should educated their children not only the knowledge but the laws and ethics.
To conclude, this phenomenon is inevitable as the development of culture exchange. However, this issues should be limited if the government and society take proper action together
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
Nowadays, It is not rare to find a news about crimes on the local paper. Unfort...
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Line 2, column 4, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...is play the key role to solve this. As the exist of internet and the development of tech...
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Line 2, column 307, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n of several crimes. Not only it brings a unreal emotions that people can not con...
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Line 2, column 316, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'emotion'?
Suggestion: emotion
...ral crimes. Not only it brings a unreal emotions that people can not control but also i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eal emotions that people can not control but also it pushes druger to earn money ...
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Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be limited if the government and society take proper action together
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88721804511 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59798101269 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575187969925 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8707456943 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.25 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162360898214 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052376163544 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382390006348 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944279841954 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326469909011 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.