Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.
Why do many working people not get enough exercise?
What can be done about this problem?
It is true that the workers nowadays spend extremely little of time on exercise, which lead to popular of the health issues in the community of officers.
In first place, living in a hustle and bustle life style will seize the free time of people, especially working people. Normally, workers have to work at least 8 or 9 hours per day with full of stress tasks. Finally, by the end of the day, they are so exhausted that they do not want to do exercise. Second, Instead of getting the hard exercise, people tend to watch films or play game for relaxing. As the result, they get familiar with their habits and feel hard to start a training.
To solve this problems, It is important to change the mindset of staffs. The staffs should learn the massive advantage of exercise such as decrease the possibility of sickness and increase the transmission of organs … Companies and government should cooperate to build a campaign to raise the movement of getting exercise for staff. In parallel, Reducing the working time and providing the more facility that worker can easily to approach, may be the effective ways. Every company should have their own gym room for staff, so that workers can get exercise when they have free time and right after works.
In conclusion, It will be a significant healthy issues for a country in the future if the number of working people not getting exercise is increasing day by day. However companies and government could stop this phenomenon by acting from now on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, at least, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74329501916 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49401450209 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.233551758 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.166666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319523140263 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101046680607 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621588018967 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170691268995 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641475777393 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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