Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you for drawing your attention to the sport amenities for adults which are in shortage in Rivne city and ask your support for resolving this issue.
Being a city resident since 2010 year I have never had possibility to attend a swimming pool in the summer. Due to the fact that all of them are closed from June to September. The reason for that is prohibition of the local authority on work. They assume it to be a waste of water recourses and power energy, because there are only few visitors during this period.
However, the majority of dwellers attempt to follow a healthy lifestyle and they would visit swimming pools with a great pleasure and joy in the summer on a regular basis, we even agree on an additional fee.
I believe the best way to rectify the situation is to recommend to our local government to allow to work for swimming pools all around the year.
I hope this matter will receive your immediate attention and will be solved. Thank you in advance.
Yours sincerely,
Tania Boyko
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57754010695 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4040392292 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657754010695 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0109311908 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168564013127 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671425387965 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774912452004 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873795451472 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922483465303 0.0580467560999 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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