International travel has become a very popular choice of tourists worldwide, it also has some influences on the host country. Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?
Traveling abroad has been globally trendy and exerted several impacts on the tourists themselves as well as the host country. Although there are still drawbacks of international travel, I think its values are more significant.
On the one hand, the downsides of welcoming foreign visitors are varied. Firstly, there can be cultural conflicts between foreign visitors and locals. Because each country has different cultures about greetings, costumes and cuisine, this can cause misunderstandings for both. Secondly, traveling abroad can create opportunities for the spread of infectious disease from this country to another one. For an example, coronavirus disease has been becoming a pandemic now because the spread of disease from Wuhan residents to foreign visitors traveling here. Finally, host countries have to put pressure on national security. Camouflaging into visitors, criminals can do a criminal acts such as drug trafficking which threatens national security.
On the other hand, I believe that the benefits of international travel are more notable. Initially, traveling abroad creates job opportunities for locals. Currently, ecotourism is a popular type of tourism chosen by a large number of visitors. Locals will let tourists live, work and eat with their family about two days, and after that locals will be received money from tourists. Besides, tourists will be expanded their knowledge. Each country will have a lot of different landscapes and cultures, so tourists will have a chance to discover and find out more about them. Last but not least, traveling helps improve some local services. Regularly, a sum of money from tourism will be used to develop some necessary infrastructure such as schools and hospitals to serve local people.
In conclusion, I am convinced that although there are drawbacks of international travel, they are outweighed by the benefits. It is also expected that this kind of traveling will be on the top list of tourism lovers in foreseeable future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... is a popular type of tourism chosen by a large number of visitors. Locals will let tourists live...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41987179487 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92453678963 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580128205128 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.965175686 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15789473684 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217158644435 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636643002464 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384817244312 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13545438631 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027390275261 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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