You should spend about 20 minutes on this task Although you have never formally studied computing you have always been interested in computers You have just read about a computer course that really interests you but it is only for people who have complete

Essay topics:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.

Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter

explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear

You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Officer,

I am writing this letter to inform that I have read an advertise about the course which your institute are offering. I am interested to start this specific course that I always wanted to understand everything about computer.

I completely understand that this course is only for people who studied the complementary course. Unfortunately, my job are currently busy and I cannot start the elementary course at the moment. I would appreciate if you open a special exception to me and give me an authorization to start the course on the following week as I need to learn everything quickly once I am going to use my learned skills as soon as the course finishes.

I hope you can open this exception and understand my situation. Moreover, I am interested to make a partnership between my job and your school and find some way to be grateful about the opportunity.

Yours sincerely,

Igor Falcao

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... this letter to inform that I have read an advertise about the course which your institute a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...derstand everything about computer. I completely understand that this course ...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92948717949 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00762645566 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3016960918 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.125 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224739767076 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924457574106 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598119980438 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150515083225 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299963438766 0.0580467560999 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... this letter to inform that I have read an advertise about the course which your institute a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...derstand everything about computer. I completely understand that this course ...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92948717949 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00762645566 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3016960918 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.125 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224739767076 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924457574106 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598119980438 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150515083225 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299963438766 0.0580467560999 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.