Libraries should focus on improving their technological resources rather than building a larger collection of paper books.
To what extent do you agree?
In this technological era, humans live in a world shaped by various inventions. One of them is a mobile phone. Some people believe that these kinds of communication devices made people less friendly and unsocial. I strongly agree with the later view due to several reasons that I’ll discuss in my essay.
To begin with, with the invention of mobile phones, communication has become faster. Therefore, one can easily reach out to their loved ones who are other parts of the world. As a result, they avoid meeting personally and sharing their personal messages, documents, or photos through smartphones. For example, nowadays people use social media like Facebook, to meet online and share their feelings instead of sharing face to face.
Moreover, mobile phones have harmful effects on society too. New generation children sit within the four walls and play mobile games, and doesn’t prefer to play outdoor games; hence, they become less active in terms of physical activity. Earlier people used to come out of their homes for sports or for a get-together; however, such scenarios are rare to see nowadays. In addition, parents are too busy with their mobile phones that they forget to spend quality time with their children; thus, children feel isolated which affects their mindset too.
To sum up, after discussing several points, I feel that the invention of mobile phones has provided more comfort and flexibility to the society, but it has broadened the social gap between people and they become more isolated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, i feel, in addition, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13654618474 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.507864117 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658634538153 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8897328833 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3846153846 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0565288794529 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0192869568929 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0197820691533 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0314992742874 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183343277095 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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