Some people think adults should learn practical skills by themselves, while others think they should learn with teachers in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There are a variety of practical skills that are necessary for the society’s job markets. Adult need to sharpen those skills to hunter jobs. Some people believe that they should be taught by professionals in classroom, while others do not agree with that.
It is admitted that, no wonder, studying in the classroom for adults is an efficient approach to master skills or be familiar with new theory. A mentor who used to be a manager or boss of an enterprise has a lot of intangible wealth and his own perspective insight of concepts and principles. Therefore, adults can be imparted experiences and knowledge directly, such as the analytical skills, in the classroom unless they have gone through more than a number of failures and summarized it.
On the other hand, due to the fierce competition in the job market and the growing demand for applicants, just only owning knowledge of basic skills is not far beyond enough for getting a job from employers. Communication and problem- solving skills, for example, all are prerequisites for adults to survive in a company. Without being proficient in those skills, adults cannot achieve the tasks that are assigned by its companies. However, these essential skills can only master through practical ways by themselves. by handling emergencies such as contradictions amongst colleagues, adults are able to accumulate valuable experiences which can very much become useful later in their life.
In my opinion, whether learning the practical skills by themselves or being taught by teachers in the classroom, the most significant thing is that we should not separate theory form practice but apply theorical knowledge to practice.
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Suggestion:
... apply theorical knowledge to practice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20955882353 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88900184134 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621323529412 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8763626039 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.083333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249421329873 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856272522298 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814566515882 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172308740483 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871438480593 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.