In many Countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of Crime? How can we deal with those causes?
Based on statistics, the rate of crime is rapidly rising in many countries. There are variety of possible reasons for this unpleasant event but steps can be definitely taken to overcome it. This essay will discuss main causes and suggest some solutions for overcoming on it.
In my opinion two may factors are blame for. Firstly, unemployment is playing a significant role in attempting for crime. Extreme poverty is a clear negative result of being jobless. Unemployed individuals always have struggled to end meet every month so they will be cynical about their society and motivated for alleging crime. The more rate of joblessness will cause the more rate of attempting to crime. Secondly, I suppose the light penalty is another reason of increasing the amount of crimes. In my country there are small punishments even for barbaric crimes so that menial criminals have been becoming notorious criminals day in, day out since they haven’t been punished because of their crime. It has been evident from the research conducted by a group of psychologists that most notorious criminals have crime record in their teenage which haven’t been paid any attention to remedy them.
From my perspective, there are some solutions to solve this social issue. The first and foremost, government should make more job opportunities by taking relevant steps such as helping to new established local business and obliged them to treat well with their employees rather than exploiting them. As a result, people would urge to their jobs. The last but not least, Government should enact strict taxes against any anarchy. Offenders should also be aware from the penalties which are waiting for them as a result of their disobeyed behaviors and crimes. This goal can be aimed by setting up an organization to care for kids-offender on parole. I believe that they wouldn’t do crime again if they were cognized from their punishments.
In conclusion, Although the number of offenders is sharply ascending but from my perspective, we can eradicate the reasons such as jobless and partisanship in imposing of penalties by various solutions like prepare more job opportunities and passing high tax penalties.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 621, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'criminals'' or 'criminal's'?
Suggestion: criminals'; criminal's
... criminals have been becoming notorious criminals day in, day out since they haven’t been...
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Line 2, column 899, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...been paid any attention to remedy them. From my perspective, there are some solu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17415730337 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78055269665 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598314606742 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7713169142 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9473684211 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7368421053 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166529412161 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482505720646 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445638540554 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093059503748 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048541149525 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.