Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?
It is true that many people are engrossed in international films rather than domestically local movies. There are many reasons behind this tendency and several solutions should be implemented by governments and individuals to improve the situation.
In term of movies, international films are a cup of tea of many people all over the world due to the excellent plot and prominent actors. The directors in foreign countries are really concerned about the quality of the movie and from them, they want to deliver a message about something valuable such as environmental protection, stop trafficking animals for illegal purpose or experience or advise about life, acquaintance, family,….International films are comprised of many categories, namely romance , comedy, action, thriller, horror, documentary,….But I believe that action and romance are two most prevalent types. For example, Titanic, Lalaland, Me before you are some of the most popular romantic films and Jurassic World, Avengers, Harley Quinn are some well-known action films.
Fortunately, several measures could be taken to prevent this problem. Firstly, the government should encourage the film critics and the viewers to promote young actors to improve their acting skills, one of the primary reasons exacerbate the quality of the movies, by complimenting them or giving them a small reward to accelerate their total acting abilities at awards ceremony. Secondly, the directors should pay more attention to a meaningful plot in order to make the seers enthusiastic about their films and perceive their movies are worth watching.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for the fact that foreign films predominate over local movies and steps need to be taken to tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48175182482 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12364694675 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605839416058 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.133259341 49.4020404114 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.888888889 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4444444444 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316149527927 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136406054623 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797228062265 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206177952722 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803922676212 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.