More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
In the recent years, many people are migrating to cities to find a better life, but living in cities is not easy as they think. There are a lot of drawbacks of living in a large metropolis. In my view, government could make urban life become better by some solutions.
Living in the city is a dream of almost all people because it offers to them more jobs and modern services as health care, entertainment.However, living in the city has some difficulty. Firstly, the cost of living is higher than in rural. Because of high standard living, people have to pay higher prices for housing, transportation and food. Another issue is that inhabitants who live in the city tend to suffer from crime rates or traffic jam day by day, Furthermore, the quality of the air or water is not clean and fresh, which is affected by smoke from transportation or factories.This phenomenon can lead to respiratory diseases.
Nevertheless, government could apply some solutions to deal with these problems. First of all, they should develop the rural areas by investing and building more factories or companies to create more jobs for people to reduce amount of people leaving their hometown to seek job. Secondly, they should raise awareness of inhabitants and encourage them to prioritize to use public mean of transportation to limit air pollution and traffic congestion. Finally, penalizing crime strictly is also one of the ways to improve city life. It can reduce crime rate and have a peaceful life.
In brief, living in the city has both negative and positive sides.However, I believe that the government should find out the best methods to improve the quality of the urban area as well as rural area.
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- More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life but city life can be extremely difficult Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city How can governments make urban life better for everyone 92
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, in brief, as well as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 965.302439024 146% => OK
No of words: 288.0 196.424390244 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89236111111 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91020903843 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 106.607317073 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 283.868780488 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.6991578107 43.030603864 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.384615385 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 5.23603664747 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383714399601 0.215688989381 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124909079628 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101446375538 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228419622276 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114444883088 0.0819641961636 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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