Dear Shy,
I hope you are doing well, as discussed earlier that you are planning to come to Indore city in near future for your industrial project. Indore is a developing city and here you will find all the necessary things which you would like to have. Like we have big shopping malls, widen roads, affordable public and private transportation, multicuisine restaurants, cafes, pubs, etc.
You have told me that you are coming for some industry project so i would suggest you to visit in winter season because you will find a stunning weather and ravishing atmosphere in that season. Industrial area in Indore city is not too far so you would have a plenty of time for leisure activities.
In Indore, we have numerous famous places but the most important place is late night street food market called SARAFA market which is a famous market for its appetizing dishes and mouth watering snacks. You can also visit our local market for shopping for your mother and family. I would recommend you to have one or two day spare time so that you can visit two famous temples of lord Shiva which is around 100 km away from the city area.
I would recommend you not to stay at the hotel because it will be total waste of money. My family is insisting me to arrange your stay at our home so that you can meet with my parents and we will have meal together. My home is in the centre of the city so it is easy to approach anywhere in the city smoothly.
I would be happy to listen from you soon. Please call me when you will reach to Indore once.
Thanks
Your's truly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ticuisine restaurants, cafes, pubs, etc. You have told me that you are coming for...
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Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...are coming for some industry project so i would suggest you to visit in winter se...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 937.175257732 138% => OK
No of words: 287.0 206.0 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50522648084 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28989589452 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547038327526 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 290.88556701 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.500340135 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3571428571 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.35714285714 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115845720495 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518805032747 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580946888056 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0611203188258 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452786143877 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.