There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher.
What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising?
How should we deal with this problem?
It is no denying that the Earth is becoming hotter than before. There are many evidences showing that the human activities are heavily affected to global temperatures. In my following essay, I will indicate some main causes and suggest few solutions relatively to solve this problem.
There are so many influences which directly impact to the environment and destroy the atmosphere on the Earth. Man-made production and business activities are first main cause, when artificial products are developed, the consumption of goods and services also increase. Therefore people have to improve products’ quality and create new ones to catch the desires and enhance human living standards. Take the introduction of plastic bags as an example, although this invention plays an important role of the economic development, but it also considers as the worse influence for environment. Second, man-made activities that have changed animals’ habitat and exploited nature resources are also main impact leading to temperatures rising. In order to develop economic, some governments typical like Africa have exchanged environment for economic development.
Although some main effects to global temperatures come from human activities, but people also have found many solutions to prevent the climate change. Firstly, with the technology development, people have introduced some eco production measures to decrease the dependences on nature resources. Investing to factories where handle most rubbish and using the renewable are the most popular solutions nowadays. Secondly, people not only regenerative the animals’ habitat and forest but also introduce many policies about environmental protection. Almost governments prohibit all activities that can harm to environment to make profits and persuade their citizen to contribute their abilities to environmental projects.
In conclusion, although human activities are main causes that bring many negative effects to nature and climate but all of them have had awareness about environmental protection and help to decrease global temperatures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 271, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...on of goods and services also increase. Therefore people have to improve products’ qualit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8431372549 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99652532056 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578431372549 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8327149269 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.2 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148891638565 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469539406444 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544730146139 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878500424833 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283358494745 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.59 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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