Environmental issues have always been an international problem because governments are not imposing harsh punishments against offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Environmental problems have been global problems from a couple of decades. Multiple factors are responsible for climate damage, some of which are related to human activities, and others are related to nature activities. Some people argue that these issues have become international problems because authorities are not introducing rules to save the environment. In my opinion, the government is not only responsible for this situation, but individuals also give their hands to fight against this problem.
There is a plethora of individual activities which are helping to prevent this major crisis. To initiate, if people use public vehicle rather than their vehicles, the level of the unnecessary gases is a decrease. By doing so, we can take fresh air and save fossil fuels. Additionally, we can use recyclable resources and not following the use and throw culture. For instance, most people use plastic bags instead of paper and cloth bags for shopping, which causes land pollution. Besides that, the farmers have to use natural fertilizer for crops. To illustrate, artificial fertilizer has chemicals that cause air pollution as well as land pollution.
Moreover, all factories should maintain their sewage system. Factories must clean the polluted water before dump in the river and sea. They also have to filter the unnecessary gases before releasing them in the air. People should stop hunting animals for skin, meat, horns, teeth, and etcetera. Because wildlife plays a vital role to maintain the ecological system.
On the other side, without government support, it is not possible to handle this huge issue. First and Foremost, the authority has to impose a high amount of the penalty if anyone breaks the environment rules. Not only that, the government should increase the price of petrol and provide reliable public transport service. In that way, people can use more public commute service. The authority of every nation should work together and make global rules for this issue. They also have to organize seminars and events to spread awareness about the environment.
To sum up, it is true that the government has more power, but it does not mean that it can solve all problems. Individuals should meet their hand with government for this international problem. Also, all countries have to come together to fight against this terrible situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...skin, meat, horns, teeth, and etcetera. Because wildlife plays a vital role to maintain...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, as to, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1990.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25065963061 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68482330677 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55672823219 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4572268718 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.6 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.16 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150872878548 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418483647905 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578802377128 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089103597851 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691260831013 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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