Dear Alex,
Thank you for your letter. I’m sorry I haven’t written for such a long time. I’m glad to hear that you have passed all your school exams.
Concerning the advice you asked me for in your letter, I consider that entering a college straight away is just a waste of money, since you aren’t yet determined about your future career. Then, I suppose you cannot afford paying for education, which would make it better to find a job.
I believe that getting a job now is a great opportunity to acquire new skills and experience. By doing this, you will also find out more about the sphere of job. You would also be able to concentrate on those subjects which you would need to take exams on if you decided to continue your education later.
Of course at this stage, you can only have a job in service which doesn’t require high qualifications, such as a seller or a waiter. You may also think of getting into hotel business, where you would be able to have a chance of career ladder even without having university qualifications, which can be very helpful during you further career.
I hope my advice was helpful.
Take care,
Max
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you have passed all your school exams. Concerning the advice you asked me for i...
^^^
Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to pay'.
Suggestion: to pay
...reer. Then, I suppose you cannot afford paying for education, which would make it bett...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, i suppose, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6067961165 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46472426046 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645631067961 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8407028888 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0833333333 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322161593833 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111759709413 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060405075391 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169267721147 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740668585689 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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